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七夕的夜晚，我没有看到鹊桥（发首旧作）

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-08-19 03:39:43 Post subject: 七夕的夜晚，我没有看到鹊桥（发首旧作）

大火星蹒跚西行。第七个黄昏亲爱的，我把双眸高挂在西南的弦月上守望  你西南而行的背影滚落出满荷的清露没有你的日子真的热似火流  七月，走出季节成了炼狱独守一池煎熬，我素衣如洗   亲爱的，今晚的银河并没有鹊桥架起南天，遗落了我守望的双眸亲爱的，黑暗中我已憔损为一颗莲子  2006年七月初八（七月流火：每年夏历七月，大火（即心宿）自南向西移动，天气慢慢变冷）

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Posted: 2007-08-19 04:31:25 Post subject:

美文 .. _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-08-19 04:33:10 Post subject:

多情善感,佳人专利.问好! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-08-19 06:35:59 Post subject:

七月流火真的是另有解意，指天气转冷～温婉，深情，问好荷梦～

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Posted: 2007-08-19 13:20:50 Post subject:

凄美，　感人

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Posted: 2007-08-19 14:27:25 Post subject:

南天，遗落了我守望的双眸如荷如梦。。。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-08-19 18:14:03 Post subject:

荷梦好诗歌！祝　诗人愉快！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-19 21:21:00 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

美文

谢谢称赞！

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Posted: 2007-08-19 21:22:12 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

多情善感,佳人专利.问好!

去年写的，拿来凑数。呵呵！问好！

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Posted: 2007-08-19 21:26:08 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

七月流火真的是另有解意，指天气转冷～

温婉，深情，问好荷梦～

是啊，诗经里“七月流火”原义的确是这样。

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Posted: 2007-08-19 21:27:39 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

凄美，　感人

是心情的记录。
问好白水！

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Posted: 2007-08-19 21:30:06 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

南天，遗落了
我守望的双眸

如荷如梦。。。

望之不得，梦飞梦散。。。

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-08-19 21:32:26 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

荷梦好诗歌！祝　诗人愉快！！

谢谢称赞。其实，荷梦只能算作一学诗者，“诗人”二字，担当不起啊。

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Posted: 2007-08-20 15:54:23 Post subject:

好个"七月流火" _________________ 广东汕头潮南区峡山镇广祥路753号黄雪兰转黄史丹收(515144)

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