zhangmin
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 Posted: 2007-08-18 21:53:27 Post subject: 夏天越走越远 |
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夏天越走越远
留下
焰火的承诺
把我的魂带到了江边
看孤鸟衔芦花寻找方向
喃喃碎语回荡在风中
在秋风里
我抱住夏夜的思绪
聆听涛声依旧
孤魂的思念跟随渔火游荡
空旷的秋野
渐渐幽暗
你在我心里点亮烛光
让我在秋寒里有丝丝暖意
你把萤火虫赶在我周围
照亮了我整个世间
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kokho
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| Posted: 2007-08-19 03:14:41 Post subject: |
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拜读 问好朋友 。。。
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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zhangmin
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| Posted: 2007-08-19 16:46:41 Post subject: |
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谢谢,问好.
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风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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杨海军
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zhangmin
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| Posted: 2007-08-19 23:18:58 Post subject: |
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| 杨海军 wrote: |
| 这首诗不错！！多来发贴。问候诗人！！！ |
谢谢,问好杨海军,希望推荐与指点. |
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