新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
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Posted: 2007-08-16 23:46:40 Post subject: 《蒲公英》 |
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《蒲公英》
新华
你拖着狼筅沿自己的路奔去
碾碎沟坎和砾石
寻找蛙鼓、溪流和伙伴
织绿一片情网
亲吻落户的向日葵
——太阳的笑脸
2007年8月17日星期五
一个陈旧的题材了...... |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-08-17 00:26:12 Post subject: |
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很有感觉。。。
问好 ;)
。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-17 14:41:48 Post subject: |
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| 旧题材也可出新意. 问好 |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
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Posted: 2007-08-17 21:30:47 Post subject: |
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| 写的还是有诗意的。 |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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