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七绝·步黄老师韵，抒怀，嘻``
满汗全溪
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PostPosted: 2007-08-14 17:21:52    Post subject: 七绝·步黄老师韵，抒怀，嘻`` Reply with quote
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欢足摩沙点点行，嫩漪颇耐一舟横。
烟消水鸟声声处，江外平湖伴客程。


二

我步行云笔步先，退三进一险登颠。
蝉辉十里风流雾，何与苍茫缓缓翩。


三

扁舟行旅未央尘，竹观荷亭影泛鳞。
青出姜公垂直钓，迁竿渭水放空纶。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-08-14 17:52:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢满汗全溪和诗,和诗另开新境,洋溢着青春朝气.
自愧老气横秋,向您学习.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-14 18:05:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
好一个"青出姜公垂直钓，迁杆渭水放空纶." Smile
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满汗全溪
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PostPosted: 2007-08-15 06:53:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
谢谢满汗全溪和诗,和诗另开新境,洋溢着青春朝气.
自愧老气横秋,向您学习.


谢谢黄老师夸奖！

黄老师，你过于自谦了。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-15 06:57:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
好一个"青出姜公垂直钓，迁杆渭水放空纶." Smile


姐姐关注的这两句中是这样断句的——
青出 姜公 垂 直钓，
迁竿 渭水 放 空纶。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-15 11:24:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
全溪,您是七仙女之一,我早有耳闻一个个修炼颇深,一个个都是才女,真是
后生可畏!老朽非自谦,韩愈说得好,学问之道,无长无少,道之所存,师之所
存也.能者为师嘛.
"杆"字以"竿"字为好,钓竿宜用竹做,取其轻便.
"迁竿渭水",真是好主意,不知渭水尚有鱼否.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-15 15:00:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢黄老师！杆是别字，竿才对，改过 shy face

本来想空纶一钓，可白水姐姐说那样做不好，只好作罢喽 sad day ，嘻``
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PostPosted: 2007-08-15 20:31:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
傻MM, 还在后悔放了那鱼呢? 没关系, 何时来TORONTO姐姐给你烧鱼吃, JJ烹饪手艺一流 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-08-16 18:02:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
傻MM, 还在后悔放了那鱼呢? 没关系, 何时来TORONTO姐姐给你烧鱼吃, JJ烹饪手艺一流 Wink


姐姐，鱼，我所欲也，熊掌，亦我所欲也；二者不可得兼，舍鱼而取熊掌者也。生，亦我所欲也，义，亦我所欲也；二者不可得兼，舍生而取义者也。

嘻``
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PostPosted: 2007-08-16 19:23:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
满汗全溪 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
傻MM, 还在后悔放了那鱼呢? 没关系, 何时来TORONTO姐姐给你烧鱼吃, JJ烹饪手艺一流 Wink


姐姐，鱼，我所欲也，熊掌，亦我所欲也；二者不可得兼，舍鱼而取熊掌者也。生，亦我所欲也，义，亦我所欲也；二者不可得兼，舍生而取义者也。

嘻``


MM的侠胆柔肠倒让JJ好生感动
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PostPosted: 2007-08-17 04:04:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
看你们热烈非凡，我不知说啥了。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-17 04:35:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
游向高原的鱼 wrote:
看你们热烈非凡，我不知说啥了。


要说谢谢，嘻``
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 04:07:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
满汗全溪 wrote:
游向高原的鱼 wrote:
看你们热烈非凡，我不知说啥了。


要说谢谢，嘻``


MM客气. 真鱼来了, 你反倒不垂纶了 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 05:39:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
姐姐，他要游向高原，那就给他一点儿自由，嘻``
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