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什么才是最好的生日礼物(几天没写,感觉成了口水诗了) Previous  [1]2
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 21:24:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
杨海军 wrote:
很感人的诗！！和平岛先生是让你去联赛中投票。问好明月诗人！！！

我已经投过了,可是没选完,就提交了，也不能再投了~ Sad
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 21:26:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
荷梦 wrote:
亲情无价！相比之下更喜欢第二首。个人愚见，也许第一首诗里你要表达的太多，因此反而不及第二首了。如果再裁剪再斟酌一下，可能会更好。
问好明月！

呵呵，你说的是，第一首把两首压在一首写了的~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-08-14 02:11:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
want to fight
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我是个平凡的人，但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情，每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-14 06:00:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
一言 wrote:
want to fight

呵呵，问好一言"]want to fight Very Happy Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-08-17 01:01:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
母亲，您举着扫帚满院追赶
我像小鸡躲在祖母的大翼下
那双被我不小心剪坏的鞋子
是您为我精心准备的生日礼物
心痛的扫帚落在您的身上
却痛在我夜夜的梦中
好视点，好情感，学习 Embarassed
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