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给Ｘ
半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 03:44:06    Post subject: 给Ｘ Reply with quote
给Ｘ
文/半溪明月

八月,阳光流金,秋风送爽
Ｘ，快打开你幽闭的小屋
放飞郁暗的蝴蝶

你看，草原上水盈草青青
我们放牧的羊群隐在云后
丢开狂舞的鞭子吧
它曾失控抽在谁的身上

我们不再说重新开始
沉陷泥沼的脚印已无力拔返
你的迷茫似乎与鸟有关
而我是羊，长有隐忍的翅膀

现在，让向日葵朝阳
露出笑脸。梅雨季节
沉甸为一枚金黄的太阳
粒粒心思饱满成藏火的种子

金秋八月，不说收成
也要看一看周围的庄稼
Ｘ，快乐起来吧！
你看风景 这边独好
2007-8-13
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 07:42:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
自提下～ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 07:43:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
让向日葵朝阳
露出笑脸。

你看风景 这边独好
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 08:15:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
让向日葵朝阳
露出笑脸。

你看风景 这边独好

问好岛，谢评阅～ Very Happy
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 15:03:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
感觉生硬
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 17:17:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
相信X，看到这诗后必定会快乐起来。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 21:07:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
杯中冲浪 wrote:
感觉生硬


噢,是有些句子吧?问好狼哥~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 21:10:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
荷梦 wrote:
相信X，看到这诗后必定会快乐起来。

呵呵，问好荷梦,多数时候我只是写给自己看的~ Very Happy
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朱文
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 21:21:13    Post subject: 问候 Reply with quote
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