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临去秋波的一转

萨福
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Joined: 07 Oct 2006
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萨福Collection

Posted: 2006-10-25 21:56:05 Post subject: 临去秋波的一转

而事实上，那年秋天的事我差不多全忘掉了，只疯狂地记得，她是我爱过的女人。 ——读Z.《打火机》有感白昼这粒方糖掉入咖啡杯里你吐出的烟圈象一朵朵洁白的云我们的鞋子在河流上漂泊漂到哪里是哪里吧我们没有方向握着你的手我悲哀地想也许某一天，回忆只能回忆临去秋波的一转

和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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Posted: 2006-10-26 00:44:52 Post subject:

意象很鲜活语感也不错 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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Posted: 2006-10-27 03:39:18 Post subject:

三节互不关联，缺乏整体感。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

维鹿延
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
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Posted: 2006-10-30 04:43:53 Post subject:

要读懂这首诗，需要作者本人提供背景。总的来说，它反映了一种心境的虚无与空洞吧。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

萨福
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Joined: 07 Oct 2006
Posts: 32

萨福Collection

Posted: 2006-10-30 20:13:21 Post subject:

谢谢各位的回贴。提出的意见都很好。非常感谢。

金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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Posted: 2007-03-14 03:28:23 Post subject: .

挖一老帖。敢叫萨福，，气死我了，这可是我滴偶像：（ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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