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◎落幕
千里
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Joined: 30 Jul 2007
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千里Collection
PostPosted: 2007-08-13 00:30:59    Post subject: ◎落幕 Reply with quote

◎落幕

云,撕裂天空
风敲碎窗
而告别,告别犹如一道远方的闪电
击落黑夜里
不移的
不移的星星
如雨般一颗颗
一颗颗坠落,之后
轻轻合上
眼睛的帘幕
甚至,不留下一丝
挥别的轮廓
2007.08.11–13
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kokho
进士出身


Joined: 30 Nov 2006
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Location: Singapore
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 01:19:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

眼睛的帘幕
甚至,不留下一丝
挥别的轮廓

《》很绝然的首尾 :))

问好 。。
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