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秋天最后一片青苞谷

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-09 18:09:15 Post subject: 秋天最后一片青苞谷

《秋天最后一片青苞谷》她们来晚了。路上可能太挤了。后面，我看见那个老男人，拿着鞭子还在驱赶那些更小的。她们：弱。矮。头发蓬乱凉风吹过，她们躬下腰，用衣服护住怀里的盒子。我看见她们脸上的泪水，风雨在衣服上留下鞭痕。父亲啊，先藏起你的镰刀。藏起秋天的欲望。她们向我们递出盒子，我们跪下来。既使再晚我们也要接纳她们，这些从遥远的草原被放牧过来的牲灵。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-09 18:51:21 Post subject:

很有些宗教色彩。我们都是羔羊-------- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-08-10 00:45:09 Post subject:

父亲啊，先藏起你的镰刀。藏起秋天的欲望。 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-10 11:40:32 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

很有些宗教色彩。我们都是羔羊--------

谢阅读！！问候少君！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-10 11:42:01 Post subject:

溪语 wrote:

父亲啊，先藏起你的镰刀。
藏起秋天的欲望。

谢溪语诗人。多交流！祝诗人愉快！！海军问好！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-08-10 19:33:36 Post subject:

很有感觉一首不错的诗歌

佳佳
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Posted: 2007-08-12 06:58:46 Post subject:

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-12 15:25:07 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

很有感觉

一首不错的诗歌

谢迪拜诗人！！远握！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-12 15:26:09 Post subject:

问候佳佳，多交流！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-12 20:47:26 Post subject:

既使再晚我们也要接纳她们，这些从遥远的草原被放牧过来的牲灵。

江南yi
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Posted: 2007-08-12 21:36:36 Post subject:

新华
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Posted: 2007-08-14 01:02:21 Post subject:

有喻像，很动情

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天赋
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