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[原创]◎ 清晨
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PostPosted: 2007-08-09 09:53:47    Post subject: [原创]◎ 清晨 Reply with quote

◎ 清晨
2007-8-5

是梦,
是芬芳?
不小心
坠落
晨的清凉

八月的山风
依旧向往
朝阳的生命

树叶上
醒来几滴雨露
原来
是鸟
滴落的声音
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PostPosted: 2007-08-09 15:16:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

标准的汉语诗歌.
我非常赞同对传统修辞的继承.
清新!

树叶上
醒来几滴雨露
原来
是鸟
滴落的声音

祝研究生生有研究!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-09 15:55:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

树叶上
醒来几滴雨露
原来
是鸟
滴落的声音
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PostPosted: 2007-08-09 16:47:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

清丽的小诗, 提
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PostPosted: 2007-08-10 00:09:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

清新 美好 :)

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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 01:51:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

Surprised
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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 05:11:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
标准的汉语诗歌.
我非常赞同对传统修辞的继承.
清新!

树叶上
醒来几滴雨露
原来
是鸟
滴落的声音

祝研究生生有研究!

x谢谢兄弟
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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 05:12:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
树叶上
醒来几滴雨露
原来
是鸟
滴落的声音
_________________有质感!!问好!!

x谢谢
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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 05:13:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
清丽的小诗, 提
x谢谢兄弟
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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 05:13:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho wrote:
清新 美好 :)

。。
x谢谢兄弟
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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 05:13:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Surprised
x谢谢兄弟
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