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停顿（外一首）

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-08-08 03:47:57 Post subject: 停顿（外一首）

停顿（外一首）停顿郭文沫（女）蜷缩在胸口诗句是出不来了就像一枚青果长着长着就不长了打一枚小小的盘扣系住思维蚂蚁一样的顿号或者逗号穿梭其中一篇课文起起伏伏辨不清山脉的走向该是抑扬顿挫的时候把自己弯曲成一个小小的逗号捡拾的那些形色各异的钥匙今夜无论如何打不开一扇青石做成的小门拯救我没有厌倦只是狐疑双手已擦不出火花漂亮的水漂一闪一闪命运就像一支歌曲忽隐忽现金黄布满之前我还没有抓住一根游移的稻草不流眼泪不流血等待一把宝剑击落灵魂上的斑斑锈迹终是无处可去的时代试着用脚说话郭文沫，女，70年代生，1990年开始发表作品。现担任《敦煌》诗刊论坛版主。地址甘肃省华池县法院倪荣贵转郭文沫邮编745600 邮箱gwmgyy@163.com 我的博http://blog.sina.com.cn/gwmo

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-08-08 04:41:19 Post subject:

今夜无论如何打不开一扇青石做成的小门

溪语
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Posted: 2007-08-08 05:12:55 Post subject:

金黄布满之前我还没有抓住一根游移的稻草 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-08-08 05:41:36 Post subject:

拯救我没有厌倦只是狐疑双手已擦不出火花漂亮的水漂一闪一闪命运就像一支歌曲忽隐忽现金黄布满之前我还没有抓住一根游移的稻草不流眼泪不流血等待一把宝剑击落灵魂上的斑斑锈迹终是无处可去的时代试着用脚说话这首较好.欣赏! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-08-08 22:34:32 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

今夜无论如何
打不开一扇青石做成的小门

问好赵福治，谢谢

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-08-08 22:36:05 Post subject:

溪语 wrote:

金黄布满之前
我还没有抓住一根游移的稻草

问好溪语

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-08-10 08:41:04 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

拯救
我没有厌倦
只是狐疑
双手已擦不出火花
漂亮的水漂一闪一闪
命运就像一支歌曲
忽隐忽现
金黄布满之前
我还没有抓住一根游移的稻草
不流眼泪不流血
等待一把宝剑
击落灵魂上的
斑斑锈迹
终是无处可去的时代
试着用脚说话

这首较好.欣赏!

感谢韩少君，问好！

夏天
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佳佳
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