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小山村(组诗)

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-08-11 21:19:37 Post subject: 小山村(组诗)

小山村(组诗) 小村，像一泓闲置山间的池塘躺在文明之外，寂静而澄明甚至看不见水面的微谰而深水的暗里，潮涌不绝麦黄季节，两把镰刀从麦畴深处，一起向外收割收割的方向，隐藏狂野与缠绵情爱如麦浪，一阵阵翻涌—— 一边收获，一边播种—— 空寂的日子被漆上浓烈底色小村人丁兴旺麦收这大片麦田，是我们的主人和奴仆它让干瘪的村庄持续呼吸并世代繁衍。你看，麦田里一弯腰我们就是沉沉的麦穗了外面的风和贪食的鸟，侵扰不了我们现在，我们开始放倒这些与日子隔岸相望忠心耿耿的家伙吧架一座桥，让孩子和麦粒一起涌入村庄你尽可以尽兴和肆意，谁也分不清这是麦浪还是爱情紫菜从山顶下来，不开荒不割草让葳蕤到达我们仰望的高度祖先和野草，互借东风绿绿地洇开他们原始的家园我们继续向低，把双脚插入海平面以下滩涂的细腻，大海的粗犷为我们演绎紫色的酸辛和希冀一竿竿毛竹漂浮着，瞻望我们坚持的日子地平线上的余晖，温暖而伤感明天已进入哺育期你眨眨眼，盼望长出微笑的芽 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-08-11 23:26:45 Post subject:

架一座桥，让孩子和麦粒一起涌入村庄.

金金
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Posted: 2007-08-12 01:18:56 Post subject:

动静分明，高手所为`` _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-08-12 02:38:48 Post subject:

你看，麦田里一弯腰我们就是沉沉的麦穗了外面的风和贪食的鸟，侵扰不了我们 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2007-08-12 15:17:27 Post subject:

特别喜欢！！麦收这大片麦田，是我们的主人和奴仆它让干瘪的村庄持续呼吸并世代繁衍。你看，麦田里一弯腰我们就是沉沉的麦穗了外面的风和贪食的鸟，侵扰不了我们现在，我们开始放倒这些与日子隔岸相望忠心耿耿的家伙吧架一座桥，让孩子和麦粒一起涌入村庄你尽可以尽兴和肆意，谁也分不清这是麦浪还是爱情紫菜从山顶下来，不开荒不割草让葳蕤到达我们仰望的高度祖先和野草，互借东风绿绿地洇开他们原始的家园我们继续向低，把双脚插入海平面以下滩涂的细腻，大海的粗犷为我们演绎紫色的酸辛和希冀一竿竿毛竹漂浮着，像我们守望的日子地平线上的余晖，温暖而悲壮明天已进入哺育期眨眨眼，就长出微笑的芽 _________________ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-12 20:45:31 Post subject:

明天已进入哺育期眨眨眼，就长出微笑的芽沙漠的风格: 淡定的冲击

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-12 21:18:07 Post subject:

喜欢~问好沙漠!

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-08-15 05:01:05 Post subject:

架一座桥，让孩子和麦粒一起涌入村庄你尽可以尽兴和肆意，谁也分不清这是麦浪还是爱情明天已进入哺育期眨眨眼，就长出微笑的芽好诗.写出新意很不容易.顶一次. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-08-19 04:52:35 Post subject:

问候朋友们! _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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