千里
秀才
Joined: 30 Jul 2007
Posts: 135
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 Posted: 2007-08-10 19:43:32 Post subject: ◎我不会写诗 |
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◎我不会写诗
诗行
藏起来了，或
忘记了
什么事都可以
假装
晴天里撑一把黑色的伞
我说我的眼里下着雨
白日里点灯，你说
我看不见你也看不见我自己
夜里醒着眼
不说出
等日出，或
日
落
2007.08.01 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-08-10 19:48:38 Post subject: |
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夜里醒着眼
不说出
等日出，或
日
落
这就是诗人 |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2007-08-11 23:47:34 Post subject: |
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夜里醒着眼
不说出
等日出，或
日
落
.............诗意的文字. |
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离家
童生
Joined: 12 Aug 2007
Posts: 12
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| Posted: 2007-08-12 00:49:51 Post subject: |
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huamei
童生
Joined: 12 Aug 2007
Posts: 13
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| Posted: 2007-08-12 01:11:40 Post subject: |
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佳佳
童生
Joined: 12 Aug 2007
Posts: 17
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| Posted: 2007-08-12 06:58:14 Post subject: |
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博弈
榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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| Posted: 2007-08-12 07:45:42 Post subject: |
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between taipei and shanghai, there is no poetry but "不说出"?
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美） |
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