田建勋 秀才
Joined: 29 Jan 2007 Posts: 109
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Posted: 2007-08-04 20:47:46 Post subject: 七绝*杂感 |
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逞艳春花风后尽,
阴阴柳色雨中新。
莫为自然空落泪,
熙熙万物不由人。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-04 22:25:53 Post subject: |
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| 好结句。深刻寓哲理。 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-06 19:53:31 Post subject: |
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阴阴柳色雨中新。
莫为自然空落泪 |
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田建勋 秀才
Joined: 29 Jan 2007 Posts: 109
田建勋Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-09 18:57:11 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢两位老师,问好。 |
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