半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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 Posted: 2006-10-20 21:32:46 Post subject: 流浪猫 |
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流浪猫
我悄悄路过
怕惊动你敏锐的神经
我只望了一眼
却招惹了你如影相随
你在足间缠绕
期待冰冷的手的抚慰
那好吧，流浪猫
暂将你收容在我小小的心房
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2006-10-21 08:51:07 Post subject: |
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| 敏锐的神经 |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2006-10-24 02:58:09 Post subject: |
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| 读，问好，多来交流。 |
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维鹿延
秀才
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
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| Posted: 2006-10-24 09:11:36 Post subject: |
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轻柔，亲切。
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半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
| Posted: 2006-10-25 06:48:42 Post subject: 问好~ |
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| 谢谢各位老师点评,远握~ |
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鹤雨
秀才
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 113
Location: 上海
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| Posted: 2006-11-03 02:57:33 Post subject: 语言轻柔， |
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温暖感人！姐姐的诗长进不少了！恭喜！
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