聽雲館主 秀才

Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-25 15:15:54 Post subject: 七律 次韻遣懐五首之四 |
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七律 次韻遣懐五首之四
回頭咫尺即天涯,萍梗飄零海客家。
陵谷頻更人意淡,桑榆在望旅途賒。
詩腸冷寞惟餐菊,酒量難勝亦醉茶。
他日重來君記取,尋常門户紫藤花。 _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-07-29 13:29:29 Post subject: |
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来学习 :))
。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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聽雲館主 秀才

Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-08 19:33:17 Post subject: |
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多謝kokho詞長賜評! _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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野航 秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 547 Location: toronto 野航Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-09 15:38:58 Post subject: |
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好诗!句句佳妙。 _________________ 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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