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欲火
婉玉儿
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Joined: 05 Aug 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 16:48:53    Post subject: 欲火 Reply with quote

你远远地端坐吧,我周身欲火
我的头发已燃成火红色
我的皮肤已燃成火红色
我的牙齿已燃成火红色
我的指甲已燃成火红色
我的嘴唇却冷下来
哆嗦着打开一朵洁白的花

你表情痛苦,十指开始弯曲
你眼睛里的火焰,是我
但你不敢靠近,一别经年
我的眸子早望成北极的冰坨

你还是靠近一点吧
再靠近一点,我的眼睛就会下雨
一直下,雾蒙蒙地,像八月
你若再靠近一点点
----就那么一点点的距离,足亦
我把你的心烧成九月的石榴
火红火红的幸福。心里
甜蜜的籽儿排排坐
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 17:55:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

幸福。心里
甜蜜的籽排排坐

祝福你
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金金
进士出身


Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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Location: 山东济宁
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 00:25:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

我的嘴唇却冷下来
哆嗦着打开一朵洁白的花
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金金
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 00:26:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

挺好的。
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 02:06:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

很特别 很热情的文字 ;)


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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 05:53:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

是的.看到了火焰.还有幸福的

我把你的心烧成九月的石榴
火红火红的幸福。心里
甜蜜的籽儿排排坐
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 06:07:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

热情的火~欣赏!
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 01:30:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
热情的火~欣赏!


当心 烧起来了 :))


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