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〖金金作品〗歌声
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PostPosted: 2007-08-05 19:55:49    Post subject: 〖金金作品〗歌声 Reply with quote

■金金



《歌声》

声音啊声音
就这样把我冲淡吧
当一种视力,那超越火与水
的斗争奉献出来
一波又一波
隐藏的曾经
把凡接触之物
置于一无法控制的世界
听,就是爱
唱,就是无声
想到——还是那些
海鸥被太阳的子弹抛尽泪水
悲哀,似乎从不知道
什么是现在?
什么是时间?
因为浩大的隐形出现
被蒙蔽的知情权
那些漂亮的鞋印
和另一些更漂亮的谎言
用什么擦拭嘴唇?
或者,给予全部的否定吧——
这些呈现虽然无法超越自己
这些为人类所想到的
但事实已让微笑更加乐观

转向归来的,不曾记忆
第几次向往的歌声啊
当无边无际的风吹拂诗人的面颊
请你啊,歌声
再奉献出来你伟大的心吧!

2007.5.23












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PostPosted: 2007-08-06 02:55:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好老朋友  气势开阔 :))
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PostPosted: 2007-08-06 05:21:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

什么是现在?
什么是时间?................一种追问.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-06 05:31:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

请你啊,歌声
再奉献出来你伟大的心吧!

好!有点雪莱,拜伦.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-06 06:05:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

当无边无际的风吹拂诗人的面颊
请你啊,歌声
再奉献出来你伟大的心吧!

欣赏,问好金金~
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 20:48:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读,欣赏,问好。 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 00:38:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho好

你的大西瓜头像还不换,今天到秋天啦
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 00:40:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治、韩少君
二位诗兄
问好
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 00:42:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月好:)
新华好,你的名字真棒:)!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 05:16:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

用什么擦拭嘴唇?
或者,给予全部的否定吧——
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 21:30:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

我是 四季常青 ;)

当一种视力,那超越火与水
的斗争奉献出来
一波又一波
隐藏的曾经
把凡接触之物
置于一无法控制的世界
听,就是爱

《》再读 喜欢 这段


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