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《随笔》
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 16:33:58    Post subject: 《随笔》 Reply with quote

《随笔》
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雨后的晴空折叠起几柄彩伞
真菌星布葡萄叶褐色的郁结
水汽溅沸加热的食油
散架的拖把挂在麻脸的石榴树上
今天我设想怎样把行李书籍塞进大巴
送孩子去寿光一中就读
还要为他准备多久的盘缠
离情总给人莫名的哀伤
烦乱也拢不起遗落的诗韵
勿指望从卦筒抽到一支上上签
人生之路该走的还要走
泥泞只是失重的裹脚布
就把它包扎在溃烂的伤口上

2007年8月8日星期三
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 16:43:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

一种表述.诗意可拓展.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 17:00:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

面对眼前的广场,没有一个词语

可以形容心中的飞翔。翻开土地

民谣托起风筝。车站的翅膀

承载机遇,锋芒

仰望。一根

谢老师指点,去了博客,仅这几句就打动了我。本想注册,我现在对注册头痛,在这里向老师致谢了。远握。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 02:04:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢你的超长句和后现代感觉 ;)

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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 21:56:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读!欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 22:50:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位老师,这几天常断线,恕不一一前去拜读大作,见谅,远握,共勉。
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