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九歌(外一首)
白水
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PostPosted: 2006-10-13 20:34:57    Post subject: 九歌(外一首) Reply with quote
九歌(外一首)

不再迷茫的是雾
朦胧散尽
你跃身而起

神秘的沙漠之狐
当你火红的身躯涨满
金色的弓箭
我只好用墨镜
遮盖眼睛

禅语

败, 一败涂地的
有肝胆, 命运
还有睿智和苍凉

是谁? 孤独的铺平
这凝固的一页
用泪水
显影缪斯之乡
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2006-10-14 06:57:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
我只好用墨镜

这句好
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白水
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PostPosted: 2006-10-14 08:04:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢. "九" 喻旭日东升, 只有戴上眼镜才敢直视 Wink
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左岸
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PostPosted: 2006-10-23 20:36:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
月光 wrote:
谢谢. "九" 喻旭日东升, 只有戴上眼镜才敢直视 Wink


这凝固的一页
用泪水
显影缪斯之乡
诗隽永，有古典词之美韵，也不泛现代感。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2006-10-24 14:23:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢左岸. 看来你也喜欢古典文学?
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PostPosted: 2006-11-02 18:29:59    Post subject: <九歌>写的更好一些 Reply with quote
<九歌>写的更好一些

有不错的"留白"空间
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PostPosted: 2006-11-04 04:45:51    Post subject: Re: <九歌>写的更好一些 Reply with quote
迪拜 wrote:
<九歌>写的更好一些

有不错的"留白"空间

谢谢, 问好
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