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井蛙（外一首）

刘海澄
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Joined: 26 Apr 2007
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Location: （邮编476200）河南省商丘市柘城县上海中路236号二高语文组
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Posted: 2007-08-03 23:33:11 Post subject: 井蛙（外一首）

井蛙（外一首）蹲在井底遭无情讥嘲谁也不知道你是捕捉害虫失脚掉进来的井口终有一线光给你信心战胜寂寞无悔泪河都干涸了星星密密的目光还在不倦地搜寻那流逝的记忆梦都枯黄了月亮傻傻的笑脸还挂在思念的常青树上（476200河南柘城二高刘海澄）

kokho
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Posted: 2007-08-04 01:33:24 Post subject:

你的诗歌，都是在形象上下功夫。。方相对了，多多努力；））。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-04 04:34:07 Post subject:

无悔泪河都干涸了星星密密的目光还在不倦地搜寻那流逝的记忆梦都枯黄了月亮傻傻的笑脸还挂在思念的常青树上不错的～

金金
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Posted: 2007-08-05 19:30:17 Post subject:

加油，不错哦 ```` _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

刘海澄
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Joined: 26 Apr 2007
Posts: 53
Location: （邮编476200）河南省商丘市柘城县上海中路236号二高语文组
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谢谢评价

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