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卜算子－荷

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-08-03 17:34:07 Post subject: 卜算子－荷

热雨伴莲妆，波碧仙姿秀。尽展娇容自透芳，出泥无尘垢。闲步立池塘，恐是秋来瘦。今岁骚魂泪别伤，异日谁思旧？

梅影三叠
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Posted: 2007-08-04 00:21:06 Post subject:

尽展娇容自透芳，出泥无尘垢。

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2007-08-04 06:11:15 Post subject:

今岁骚魂泪别伤，异日谁思旧？喜欢这个结尾，淡淡的忧伤。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-08-04 15:36:44 Post subject:

梅影三叠 wrote:

尽展娇容自透芳，
出泥无尘垢。

问好。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-08-04 15:38:02 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

今岁骚魂泪别伤，
异日谁思旧？

喜欢这个结尾，淡淡的忧伤。

谢谢兄台点评，问好！

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