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新音旧韵

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-03 07:15:54 Post subject: 新音旧韵

新音旧韵 (一) 说起江南不过梦中野生的菱角和雨巷沉寂的青石板撩开柳烟, 牵动一个脱口而出的唤。如若你不应声, 我又何必回来 (二) 吟月月已旧酒浓, 墨清, 还有文人骚客的唾液, 涂抹着东方女子杏脸桃腮的老年斑商贸大厦的灯光亮了性急的跳出些许明星 (三) 写残阳, 是因为如血文人, 这原本懦弱的动物遏不住残暴从骨头里喷出来 “谁, 能给我一张白纸?” 你问戈多戈多牵来一位跛足, 一位瞎眼, 一位失聪 (四) “COME, COME IN COME,,,,,,IN”现代艺术挑逗的手指, 性感的唇，醉进门去 “GO OUT, GO……OUT!” 几声断喝演播室惊倒我和我的郎君

溪语
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Posted: 2007-08-03 08:03:31 Post subject:

酒浓, 墨清, 还有文人骚客的唾液, 涂抹着东方女子杏脸桃腮的老年斑 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-03 15:08:39 Post subject:

写残阳, 是因为如血文人, 这原本懦弱的动物遏不住残暴从骨头里喷出来 “谁, 能给我一张白纸?” 你问戈多戈多牵来一位跛足, 一位瞎眼, 一位失聪非常好的一组诗！！！学习了！！问候白水诗人！！远握！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

驾言出游
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Posted: 2007-08-03 17:57:50 Post subject:

说起江南不过梦中野生的菱角和雨巷沉寂的青石板撩开柳烟, 牵动一个脱口而出的唤。如若你不应声, 我又何必回来禁不住的思念。 _________________ 欲把西湖比西子，从来佳茗似佳人

郭兴军
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Posted: 2007-08-03 18:22:18 Post subject:

诗句排列轻巧、灵动，诗意释放淡然、悠然，不错，支持！ _________________ 胜者为王。

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-03 20:37:09 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们鼓励, 问好

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-04 02:15:50 Post subject:

“COME, COME IN COME,,,,,,IN”现代艺术挑逗的手指, 性感的唇，醉进门去 “GO OUT, GO……OUT!” 几声断喝演播室惊倒我和我的郎君白水的诗歌耐品，学习了，问候白水妹妹～

kokho
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Posted: 2007-08-04 10:03:42 Post subject:

白水　又来了新的突破，从古韵新写　还来个　后现代结尾　！！！好。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

金金
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Posted: 2007-08-05 19:33:02 Post subject:

拥有建筑的美啊 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-06 21:33:59 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

“COME, COME IN
COME,,,,,,IN”现代艺术
挑逗的手指, 性感的唇，醉
进门去
“GO OUT, GO……OUT!”
几声断喝
演播室
惊倒我
和我的
郎君

白水的诗歌耐品，学习了，问候白水妹妹～

月亮, 其实这首诗歌几乎是我和我先生去参观现代艺术展览的平铺直述, 只不过那声断喝虽然吓我一跳, 但我和我先生不是被惊倒的, 而是走累了顺势倒在演播室的沙发上 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-06 21:37:25 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

白水　又来了新的突破，

从古韵新写　还来个　后现代结尾　！！！

好。。。 Cool

。

KOK, 谢谢鼓励. Razz

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-06 21:38:44 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

拥有建筑的美啊

问好金金. 我总在想, 哪天能听的你的歌.

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-07 08:07:16 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

金金 wrote:

拥有建筑的美啊

问好金金. 我总在想, 哪天能听的你的歌.

金金唱歌？什么时候录一首发上来，让我们大家都欣赏欣赏～ Very Happy

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