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《冷冷的秋风》

乙木先生
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Posted: 2007-08-03 01:45:25 Post subject: 《冷冷的秋风》

《冷冷的秋风》今夜刮起了北风刮起了冷冷的秋风把游子的心刮成了烙上冰层的一把铁锁还毫不留情的把臃肿的大地拍打成东倒西歪刮进了坠落的地域冷冷的冷冷地秋风却是一场十月的风依赖于流行的病毒感染着渴望团圆的金秋烧的整个心情都是冰冷冰冷的可怜孤独的残月不再思索与凝望而是选择了同大地一样默然沉离！ _________________ 诗是诗人的灵魂!——系中国书协会员.

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-03 04:19:10 Post subject:

故乡思情~问好！

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Posted: 2007-08-03 15:20:41 Post subject:

把游子的心刮成了烙上冰层的一把铁锁 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

乙木先生
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Posted: 2007-08-04 18:02:49 Post subject:

问好二位诗友 _________________ 诗是诗人的灵魂!——系中国书协会员.

金金
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Posted: 2007-08-05 19:38:54 Post subject:

风格凸出 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

乙木先生
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Posted: 2007-08-06 05:54:08 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

风格凸出

谢点评
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