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一个人在月光下走

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Posted: 2007-08-02 20:21:17 Post subject: 一个人在月光下走

一个人在月光下走其实很孤独脚步敲响了一阵犬吠在这荒郊僻壤的小镇野狗像痞子一样成群结队横行在寂廖的街头给所有的朋友打电话都说我已经关机只有诗鬼李贺在耳边吟咏他的诗句用月色暗示我说从我到你其实都不容易月光下再也无人为一些角逐感到羞愧我们无法校正偏离的轨迹月光照不到的地方是梦乡一个人在月光下走只有影子跟在身后亦步亦趋见证着一轮明月的下面隐藏了几多孤寂和残缺 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2007-08-02 20:59:54 Post subject:

品味孤独. 而孤独有时恰恰是创作之源

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Posted: 2007-08-02 22:59:06 Post subject:

乡土诗歌我很喜欢。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-08-03 03:44:34 Post subject:

月光下再也无人为一些角逐感到羞愧我们无法校正偏离的轨迹孤独和思索，喜欢你的诗歌~问好溪语！

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Posted: 2007-08-03 07:59:16 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

品味孤独. 而孤独有时恰恰是创作之源

曾喜欢读一本书,叫<百年孤独>.
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Posted: 2007-08-03 08:00:39 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

乡土诗歌我很喜欢。。。

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问好咱乡土的兄弟!
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Posted: 2007-08-03 08:09:08 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

月光下再也无人
为一些角逐感到羞愧
我们无法校正
偏离的轨迹

孤独和思索，喜欢你的诗歌~问好溪语！

多谢明月光临,问好!!
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Posted: 2007-08-03 15:03:31 Post subject:

一轮明月的下面隐藏了几多孤寂和残缺 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-03 17:38:29 Post subject:

生活，挺不容易的。 _________________ 欲把西湖比西子，从来佳茗似佳人

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Posted: 2007-08-05 05:20:17 Post subject:

真是写出了孤独。克服孤独，只有智慧。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-08-05 08:32:57 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

一轮明月的下面
隐藏了几多孤寂和残缺

问海军好！！
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生活，挺不容易的。

问好朋友！
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Posted: 2007-08-05 08:36:04 Post subject:

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真是写出了孤独。克服孤独，只有智慧。 ball playing

－－－多谢少君点评，问好。
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Posted: 2007-08-05 19:14:03 Post subject:

看到了你的光芒`` _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-08-07 06:39:45 Post subject:

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看到了你的光芒``

谢谢!
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