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《红》

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-29 14:29:07 Post subject: 《红》

红红是最初的颜色戴在花儿头上成为一个女孩的名字年少的时候在红的身边走过向她，打听初恋的消息红寂寞于自家深深的庭院想念她的时候抓把月光一撒就能长出美丽的梦来梦被小心地藏起或彻底忘却免得一不小心让红，在春天里露出鲜艳 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-06-29 15:22:52 Post subject:

清丽 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-06-29 17:12:36 Post subject:

透明，感觉真好

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Posted: 2007-06-29 17:58:31 Post subject:

很舒服的小诗

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Posted: 2007-06-30 10:21:12 Post subject:

最后一段特别出彩~问好少君!

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Posted: 2007-06-30 14:46:37 Post subject:

怎么这么多马屁精？？前面的很平常，从平常中的到的浅显就只有最后俩句还可以

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-30 15:09:50 Post subject:

谢楼上各位! 学龙也是个敢说实话的人-----对时东兵的评论就很大胆. 诗坛要多有不同的声音------大力提倡.真的! 仁者见仁,智者见智.百花齐放,百家争鸣. 多些互相批评,少些互相吹捧.文学艺术需要严肃的批评精神! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-06-30 15:21:56 Post subject:

这样的诗回归了当初那种清纯。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-06-30 23:09:06 Post subject:

欧阳学龙 wrote:

怎么这么多马屁精？？
前面的很平常，从平常中的到的浅显
就只有最后俩句还可以

你觉得不好的，不见得别人就不觉得好，允许不同的意见，但不要有攻击和污蔑性的语言~深沉有深沉的厚重,纯真清丽自有它的吸引人处~

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Posted: 2007-07-01 04:14:22 Post subject:

纯美的小夜曲

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Posted: 2007-07-01 15:04:58 Post subject:

语言及描述的视角有新意，浅而不俗。读来清新。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-07-04 23:22:19 Post subject:

谢谢NOBODY 先生。可惜我不懂英文。欢迎批评指正。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-08-02 05:59:17 Post subject:

一个原色的 zoom-in 和 zoom-out / _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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