半溪明月
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 Posted: 2007-07-31 21:04:13 Post subject: 整齐 |
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整齐
文＼半溪明月
我喜欢检阅的士兵高高迈出的步伐
喜欢深海群鱼整齐归一的漫射
喜欢所有积极向上生长着的植物
喜欢草原上的万马奔腾，喜欢江河奔流
他们也许命运卑微却活得庄严
他们目标坚定从而造就一种气势
我常为生命中的这种整齐慨叹
却只能做个临渊的观众，无法归列
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韩少君
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| Posted: 2007-08-01 00:25:57 Post subject: |
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软弱也是整齐的,不幸也是整齐.怨恨也是整齐的啊
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-08-01 09:09:53 Post subject: |
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| 韩少君 wrote: |
| 软弱也是整齐的,不幸也是整齐.怨恨也是整齐的啊 |
恩，这些我不羡慕了～问好少君！  |
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kokho
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| Posted: 2007-08-01 10:33:18 Post subject: |
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不容易呀。。
在朗诵诗里 寻求突破 ；））
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-08-01 21:37:17 Post subject: |
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| kokho wrote: |
不容易呀。。
在朗诵诗里 寻求突破 ；））
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一针见血啊，是退步~现在正苦恼着呢~问好KOKHO~ |
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白帆
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| Posted: 2007-08-02 07:14:00 Post subject: |
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杨海军
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山城子
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| Posted: 2007-08-04 00:25:10 Post subject: |
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问好！让大家的诗整齐起来！
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驾言出游
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| Posted: 2007-08-04 01:18:30 Post subject: |
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生命令人向往。明月从天上赶来，难道不是因为着地上的勃勃生机？ 
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