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火车从头顶跑过

沙漠
秀才

Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2007-07-30 18:27:54 Post subject: 火车从头顶跑过

火车从头顶跑过枝头的风，把花儿吹开又吹落来不及说出爱情，芬芳的花蕊和你明眸里闪烁的秘密，离我还有一寸距离一寸之间，心未泅渡，风已金黄瑟瑟的落叶，覆盖露珠和寂静的桥面日子的火车从头顶跑过，它的长鸣是一道弧线，牵动童年灿烂的草垛和炊烟白云飘过了山岗，飞禽走兽四散想像的绿鞭折断已久放弃了放牧和一些自娱的时光你说蓝色草原上，生长毡房和蘑菇我的回望，没入沉寂的尘烟 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-07-30 20:22:54 Post subject:

冷抒情的诗, 深藏着感动.

博弈
榜眼

Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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Posted: 2007-07-30 20:37:32 Post subject:

挺好的诗。命题也不错。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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Posted: 2007-07-31 17:06:52 Post subject:

火车从头顶跑过，它灿烂的长鸣是一道弧线，牵动童年的草垛和炊烟火车的意象很好 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

郭兴军
童生

Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 96
Location: 中国陕西
郭兴军Collection

Posted: 2007-08-01 06:13:33 Post subject:

“诗歌的探索永无止境。” 不错。 _________________ 胜者为王。

郭兴军
童生

Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 96
Location: 中国陕西
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Posted: 2007-08-01 06:13:33 Post subject:

“诗歌的探索永无止境。” 不错。 _________________ 胜者为王。

韩少君
进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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Posted: 2007-08-01 13:47:40 Post subject:

好!意象----- 火车从头顶跑过 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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