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命运的黄昏之三

奥冬
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Posted: 2007-07-25 22:19:19 Post subject: 命运的黄昏之三

夜蛾眨动黄昏的呼吸第一颗星浮现谁的命运在宇内寻找主人？ _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2007-07-25 22:49:19 Post subject:

前两句精彩，结尾的问句似可斟酌。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

奥冬
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Posted: 2007-07-29 00:11:53 Post subject:

问好司马兄，感谢品读。 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2007-07-29 03:57:06 Post subject:

提了！！！！！！！！！！！！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-07-29 04:26:28 Post subject:

言犹未尽 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-07-31 17:53:32 Post subject:

问好两位朋友 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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