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五绝.青松茶楼与挚友品茗

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Posted: 2007-07-27 15:40:05 Post subject: 五绝.青松茶楼与挚友品茗

青松茶楼与挚友品茗　　　　　　梦飞翁　2007.7.28 挚友话蹉跎，长诗和泪歌。滨城茶一盏，三载润心窝。 _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-07-27 18:44:38 Post subject:

深沉。

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Posted: 2007-07-27 22:52:48 Post subject:

谢莹雪雅评！ _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-07-27 23:32:25 Post subject:

比韶还厉害哈！ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2007-07-28 02:47:25 Post subject:

长诗和泪歌以詩代話，厲害！ _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2007-07-28 06:38:59 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

比韶还厉害哈！

诚谢仁兄清赏！望赐教！
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我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-07-28 06:39:52 Post subject:

戴玨 wrote:

长诗和泪歌
以詩代話，厲害！

谢戴兄雅评！
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我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-07-28 17:57:11 Post subject: Re: 五绝.青松茶楼与挚友品茗

梦飞翁 wrote:

青松茶楼与挚友品茗
　　　　　　梦飞翁　2007.7.28
挚友话蹉跎，长诗和泪歌。
滨城茶一盏，三载润心窝。

每个人都想成功，可是不会每个人都成功，长诗和泪，能理解。梦兄好诗！

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Posted: 2007-07-29 04:45:21 Post subject: Re: 五绝.青松茶楼与挚友品茗

晓松 wrote:

梦飞翁 wrote:

青松茶楼与挚友品茗
　　　　　　梦飞翁　2007.7.28
挚友话蹉跎，长诗和泪歌。
滨城茶一盏，三载润心窝。

每个人都想成功，可是不会每个人都成功，长诗和泪，能理解。梦兄好诗！

晓松洞察我意矣!诚谢雅评！
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我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-07-31 23:43:48 Post subject:

汤善满呈跎，香闲始有歌。安排多少淡，可衬一甜窝？嘻嘻`` _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-10 14:19:35 Post subject:

谢海南丢和诗。 _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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