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[原创]月夜随想
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PostPosted: 2007-07-16 19:20:02    Post subject: [原创]月夜随想 Reply with quote

                  
   月夜,独自望着窗外的冰轮,看它宁静端庄的挂在空中。尽管知道这星球上,并没有神话传说当中的桂树,没有偷吃仙丹腾空而去的美丽的嫦娥,还有那只可爱的玉兔,但我仍然欣赏这在地上见到它皎洁的感觉。

  或许是两三岁起,就背诵古诗词,而后又读了古典名著和武侠小说过多的缘故,我自小时起,就爱独自赏观窗外的明月。在清辉里遐想,让思绪和那清辉一样,倾泻满空,无拘无束。遐想自己身着一袭素雅衣裙,在这清辉如霜之夜,焚一炉檀香,端坐于庭院。或看书赏景,或挥笔泼墨绘图,临风赋诗词、或坐于古筝旁,奏一曲《云水禅心》。再不然就像武侠小说中的女侠那样,在月光下轻舞长剑,武艺高强,英姿飒爽。这便是我从小到大在这冰轮下的遐想。

  这样的场景,经常让我沉醉,这样的思绪,让我暂时忘却了现实的苦涩。其实如果真的身临其境了,也可能会觉得没意思。置身其中,或是因习以为常,或是因司空见惯,总之因种种客观现实的存在,并不觉如何好,如何之美。这就是东坡居士曾诗云的,“不识庐山真面目,只缘身在此山中”。我想这就是此诗的哲理吧?

  我并不喜欢空想,可是既然置身其间,难以相知认识,也难以见到美,反不如远远的观看,又何必身临其间?倒不如让思绪插上想像的翅膀去飞,这样倒是能飞出些美来。想来想像总是美好的,就拿我所喜爱的月来说吧,如果人们一开始就知道,它那里荒无人烟,也不像在地上,见到的皎洁美丽。恐怕就不会有那千古的名篇佳句了吧?要知道歌颂月之名句是很多的。这就是人们常说的,“距离产生美”吧?在不明了之时,总会有遐想的美好空间。或许有时真的需要一些距离,否则便会失去最初欣赏到的美丽。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-16 22:10:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

美妙的遐思不已过多,否则就脱离实际了。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-17 18:29:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-22 05:11:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,问好莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 01:56:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好莹雪!此篇的景、情、意都是别人写过的,要千方百计写出自己独特的感受和发现才会是一篇艺术作品。这要求太高了,但与你共勉!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-28 01:07:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-07-28 01:10:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 05:55:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 12:54:18    Post subject: Reply with quote



难得过来 给好朋友上茶。。。







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PostPosted: 2007-08-09 17:59:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

qxz-123456 wrote:
欣赏,问好莹雪
谢谢,问好qxz-123456
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PostPosted: 2007-08-09 18:04:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
问好莹雪!此篇的景、情、意都是别人写过的,要千方百计写出自己独特的感受和发现才会是一篇艺术作品。这要求太高了,但与你共勉!

你好,嗯,的确有类似的文章,但和我的并不太一样。我的只是感想。文章的确需要有独特风格,我也正在努力。谢谢你的点评! shake hands
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PostPosted: 2007-08-09 18:06:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho wrote:


难得过来 给好朋友上茶。。。






谢谢朋友! shake hands
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