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渔(外三首)
东雪西雨
童生


Joined: 10 Feb 2007
Posts: 51
Location: 江苏张家港
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PostPosted: 2007-07-26 21:11:33    Post subject: 渔(外三首) Reply with quote



走到孤独,岸就靠不住
一块一块掉下来,砸破些时令
我弓身,放长尾巴线,和陌生的鱼
谈到今年的生存

这取决于我们的态度,五月
彼此沉默,我行一程
停一阵,再行一程

最后,我掉进了方向里
许多鱼呀,来来往往
它们和我一样,赶赴
一场盛宴




这时候适合,披一些过去的外壳
春天被剥开来,我跳进去
做个横刀立马的人

做什么非要做江湖中人
这些开过花的年份,你坚持
做压寨夫人,而我执意
冒充那个人,飘来飘去

回到旧传说,山高一节
我就矮一寸,并且
还要矮下去,直到你
转身




我离开的时候,父亲,还在院里
喊我的乳名。好时光呵
声音从泥土的深处
翻了开来

我进了城,家安在十一楼
够不到啊,你说。声音的长度
我侧身,让院里的风
破窗而入

知道么,父亲,我住多高
愧就有多深,你背来的豆荚
我剥一颗,痛一刻




我说到你,你就扯别人
我扯别人,你就说到我
越洗越浊的话,你要
沉多久才清澈

我假装破碎一些句子
我假装倒下一个人物
我假装谈错一次恋爱
你真的就流出了好多血

现在,我才明白
结婚十年,我一直生活在
你的厨房里
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2007-07-27 02:15:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人感觉非常 好的诗!!!!!了不起!!!问候诗人!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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金金
进士出身


Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 03:54:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

现场跳跃的感觉,不错
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