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晓松
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Posted: 2007-07-21 19:34:06 Post subject: 拆字联

最新捉到一拆字联，有兴趣者不妨一试。妙少女，门口问，何人可做古人文？

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-21 21:28:19 Post subject:

哈, 斑主打擂了, 静侯勇者

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-21 22:37:15 Post subject:

期待中。

他乡客
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Posted: 2007-07-22 07:45:43 Post subject:

先蒙一个. 只求拆字,不求字意和平仄. 嵩山高, 主人住, 沁水心涟走水车. 沁 qìn, 从水,心声. 涟 lian 小波,风吹水面所形成的波纹. 其实,这是借来朋友的拆字游戏结果凑热闹. 见下链: http://www.comefromchina.com/newbbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=493181&perpage=15&pagenumber=3 容在下再思.

野航
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Posted: 2007-07-22 10:48:13 Post subject:

他乡客 wrote:

先蒙一个. 只求拆字,不就字意和平仄.

嵩山高, 主人住, 沁水心涟走水车.

沁 qìn, 从水,心声.
涟 lian 小波,风吹水面所形成的波纹.

其实,这是借来朋友的拆字游戏结果凑热闹. 见下链:

http://www.comefromchina.com/newbbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=493181&perpage=15&pagenumber=3

容在下再思.

已经够厉害了！
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白水
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Posted: 2007-07-22 14:57:32 Post subject:

他乡客 wrote:

恭候新作

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-22 15:44:44 Post subject:

期待

他乡客
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Posted: 2007-07-23 05:37:05 Post subject:

再来个找乐的。不过还是对仗不严谨。吞天口，水酉酒，蹴足就掰手分手。（咳，年轻的情侣说分手就分手了）

晓松
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Posted: 2007-07-23 16:54:47 Post subject:

他乡兄果然厉害啊！两天对出了两副下联，不得了！单说第二副，既拆了字，又押韵，高！“蹴足就掰”这四个字连起来很不容易，离完美已经不远了。

他乡客
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Posted: 2007-07-24 03:14:50 Post subject:

女皇武则天为自己的名子造了个字，上明下空（曌音Zhao) ，要与日月同辉。借来凑个趣。斌文武，广大庆，佲人名曌日月空。或斌文武，广大庆，姳女名曌日月空。（咱可不想象郭沫若那样为武则天翻案）

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-24 03:35:22 Post subject:

好才思

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2007-07-24 04:47:48 Post subject:

各个都厉害！ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

野航
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Posted: 2007-07-24 13:10:43 Post subject:

他乡客兄果然厉害，三个都不错，中间最佳。我也凑一个：张长弓，身寸射，箭竹前克十口儿 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-24 14:04:28 Post subject:

继续, 加油.

野航
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Posted: 2007-07-25 13:14:01 Post subject:

张长弓，单弓弹，箭竹前洇大口水这位成吉思汗，为了提高命中率，发射之前还在箭尖上吐了一大口口水。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-07-25 16:32:02 Post subject:

晓松好叫人冥思苦想,但为凑兴,不计工拙,拟出下联,以博一笑. 美大羊秋心愁骊马丽骑大可马

野航
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Posted: 2007-07-26 13:18:22 Post subject:

不知下联是否是晓松自创，总之太绝了，害得我这几天头大，看了几位朋友，尤其是他乡客的上联，都很妙，但仍觉得不够完美。我将几位朋友的上联综合利用，拟出一两个新的，朋友们再看看如何？嵩山高，主人住，箭竹前骑大可马妙少女，门口问，何人可做古人文？张长弓，单弓弹，蹴足就骑大可马张长弓，单弓弹，蹬足登骑大可马妙少女，门口问，何人可做古人文？ _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-26 16:31:02 Post subject:

各个才气袭人, 加油

他乡客
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Posted: 2007-07-26 18:38:15 Post subject:

我与野航有同感，上联一般是以仄声结尾。晓松的原句可为下联。想起明朝末代崇祯皇帝自尽于景山。又凑了一个。明日月，矢口知，峦山亦璟王京日，妙少女，门口问，何人可做古人文？

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-26 19:06:16 Post subject:

他乡客 wrote:

我与野航有同感，上联该是仄声结尾。晓松的原句可为下联。想起明朝末代皇帝自尽于景山。又凑了一个。

明日月，矢口知，峦山亦璟王京日，
妙少女，门口问，何人可做古人文？

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