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桃子熟了(外一首)
东雪西雨
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Joined: 10 Feb 2007
Posts: 51
Location: 江苏张家港
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 21:22:36    Post subject: 桃子熟了(外一首) Reply with quote

写完桃花,我坐到夏天的核里
风回到枝桠,落下来
你的过错是一场花瓣雨
之后,让我欲罢不能的等待
一回头,你的脸红透半面

要出嫁了,我备好美酒夜光杯
秋天抢先入坐,夏天省略了一截
啪的一声,今年
没我什么事了

夏夜

十一楼,一颗星路过窗
我坐在自己的左边,小板凳
还停留在春天的回忆里

我们说些什么呢,桃花开败后
你比我更忧郁,独自去了记忆的下游
我挡住时间,幸运地
抵达终点

今夜,点亮星空
砸下来的思念
由它去吧
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司马策风
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 22:42:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

新颖,优美,老练。赞!
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东雪西雨
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PostPosted: 2007-07-26 16:25:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

前一阵子写小说,所以很久没来这里.想你们了.
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-07-27 02:28:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

东雪西雨诗人写得一手好诗歌啊!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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