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[原创]山景

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Posted: 2007-07-24 04:39:56 Post subject: [原创]山景

树静闻蝉鸣山冷听泉清云高绕亭低峰远亮天晴 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-07-24 04:46:06 Post subject:

平仄可以在推敲一下。我个人以为。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

kokho
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Posted: 2007-07-25 01:55:23 Post subject:

看到你的新作　很是高兴。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

晓松
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Posted: 2007-07-25 19:43:38 Post subject: Re: [原创]山景

勿妄言 wrote:

树静闻蝉鸣

山冷听泉清

云高绕亭低

峰远亮天晴

意境不错，欣赏了！

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