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月经
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 04:29:04    Post subject: 月经 Reply with quote

月经

在她蹙眉的时候
玫瑰上的水珠滑落成
暗色村月

我知道这时不能离开她
也不能太靠近
篱笆外的猫狗窃窃私语

宇宙预期了这些
黑洞里的蝙蝠
倾巢而出

月亮开始绘上
背光的黑潮,下一轮回
喜怒哀乐的四周

我紧紧捏着自己的手心
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 19:32:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

你这标题让人退避三舍,诗歌到不错 Very Happy
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Lake
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 09:26:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,听听白水说的。

月亮经过...

once in a blue moon
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 10:17:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

没写过这个题目,尝试一下喽。

硬要掰,月经:the doctrine of the moon,
她在月下练着九阴真经呢,完了,这解释更不讨好/

纯属实验创作,期勿惊勿怒。 Confused
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 10:33:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laughing 真会掰扯

怎一个服字了得 Laughing

不惊也不怒,倒是差点儿从椅子上笑掉下来。赶快找门把,到外换气去。。。
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游向高原的鱼
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 16:09:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

弄这个题目,倒不必,我觉得。
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kino
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 18:43:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy 不过因为这个题目,我倒是一个字一个字多来,发现还挺有趣。题目的作用不容忽视。
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