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月光曲(下篇)
奥冬
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PostPosted: 2007-07-21 02:20:47    Post subject: 月光曲(下篇) Reply with quote

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剪一片月光封进信里
寄到天堂
还是我的梦中?

2

月光被夜露打湿
挣扎成雾的弥漫
呆楞楞的,我的心坠入童话

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我的名片上只是空白
遇到诗人
便有月光笼罩

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月光靠在我肩上
语言消融
我们走过四野

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我跟月光手牵手
林木无声,峰峦皆明
夜色浮动宇宙的呼吸

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月光如此执著
非得拉我回盛唐
与李白对饮

7

我醉了
月光
被溢流的相思淹没

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掸落满身月光
我下定决心
走进你梦里

9

月光月光,挤不进我的窗棂
想你的梦

也挤不出去

10

月光一落地就会开花结果

远远的孤灯下
我想象所有的开始与结局
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江雪
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PostPosted: 2007-07-21 05:41:57    Post subject: 问候 Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-07-21 07:10:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

节制的一组短章.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-22 16:43:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢过两位品读,问好
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PostPosted: 2007-07-22 20:43:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好。来欣赏:)
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PostPosted: 2007-07-22 22:58:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好金金兄
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 04:54:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

断 章 ,意境斐然~
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 19:39:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢诗友品读,问好
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