聽雲館主 秀才
Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-21 21:44:13 Post subject: 七律 丁亥夏月苦熱又一章叠韻 |
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七律 丁亥夏月苦熱又一章叠韻
牛斗中宵紫氣騰。山城六月水雲蒸。
扁舟夜月邀蘇子,茅屋秋風仰杜陵。
孤雁南飛銀漢冷,大江東去古愁勝。
何如曠遠滄溟外,點滴心頭冬飲冰。 _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-21 22:20:54 Post subject: |
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韵律和谐,意境深远。 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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聽雲館主 秀才
Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-24 13:37:50 Post subject: |
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謝謝接樓上二位詞長雅評,要遠行了,後天即動身,取道香港下月中旬可回加拿大! _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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