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<<粮食的色泽>> (陆续添加)

鲁齐
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Posted: 2007-07-14 12:23:46 Post subject: <<粮食的色泽>> (陆续添加)

《粮食的色泽》鲁齐那片忧伤的山田，镢柄轻微抖动着。不住地抖动土块就有碎裂的可能紫红色红薯；父亲肤色样的紫，黯红，寒嫩深秋里走出大地被认真挑选，留种一只红薯将蘖五株蔓芽叶色像极了母系的种块而现在要被贮存从山田进入土洞冬眠过后的红薯柔软蜜甜父亲一年最紧要的工作老人心情激动，动作颤抖取薯，入筐，排洞世上最低廉的粮食红薯父辈，略吸阳光跟着主人走动在山腰无论色泽式样，个头，个个红薯里的楷模；能繁殖的粮食初春里就会进入热炕，发芽移栽，更多红薯长满山坡生育过后的红薯父亲再吃而现在留种，在初冬《黄金色的玉米》看，玉米才有着最贵重的色父亲说着，就用螺丝刀捅向黄金士兵样的籽粒顺从地离开母体成排的玉米粒，排比句样落进簸箩就有彩虹一闪；母亲搓粒的地方晾晒玉米，展示金黄的器皿小米黍子偶尔作客。可是玉米粮食中的粮食，一日不可或缺搓玉米是母亲一生最快慰的事刷刷！两只带有缺口的原生粮掉落着黄金。眩目而诱惑的色恩。一物降一物。父亲额首并没看到母亲手掌的红渗出的血。搓玉米往往在早晨玉米饱和了太多太阳的色 07.7.15 《高粱花开》粮食抽穗，比如高粱山田色泽变化多么奇妙重要。涅槃大地原色伊始一串火炬擎举多少闪烁的星星精灵般鹅黄的小灯笼，多像大山乳儿依偎母亲，吮吸琼浆和太阳底色，成熟的过程一粒高粱已悄悄来到世上花瓣雨，色泽原始的脆弱倏忽即逝。而有谁，关注过火红高粱最初落英深入到人们身体和锄头旁边；一块山田茁壮的消息 07.7.19 _________________ 诗歌是一面旗帜!

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Posted: 2007-07-15 04:09:10 Post subject:

玉米饱和了太多的太阳好！

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Posted: 2007-07-15 04:13:45 Post subject:

问好鲁齐诗人！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-07-16 15:49:03 Post subject:

原色原汁原味。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-07-19 21:58:34 Post subject:

陈若祥 wrote:

玉米饱和了太多的太阳

好！

问候陈若祥!
感谢看阅!
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鲁齐
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Posted: 2007-07-19 21:59:23 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

问好鲁齐诗人！！！

问候杨海军.
拥抱握手!
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Posted: 2007-07-19 22:11:30 Post subject:

问好. _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2007-07-19 23:45:55 Post subject:

不错的，用字还可再精炼。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-07-22 19:33:54 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

原色原汁原味。

谢谢野航看阅．
问候！
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Posted: 2007-07-22 19:34:32 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

问好.

问候伤城！
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Posted: 2007-07-22 20:41:16 Post subject:

喜欢第儿首，莫名的喜欢 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-07-23 04:50:46 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

喜欢第儿首，莫名的喜欢

谢谢老乡金金喜欢.
我淄博.
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Posted: 2010-06-05 21:45:36 Post subject:

提。 //。。。。。。。。。。。。。 _________________ 诗歌是一面旗帜!

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