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辘轳．女人．狗

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白水
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Posted: 2007-07-07 07:07:09 Post subject: 辘轳．女人．狗

辘轳．女人．狗辘轳放不开的是你　紧紧地拽，　拽不住的绳．千年的古井可有源头？你固执的走，　向地心深处女人思绪如发，忧心如发如发的还有你的思念常言说，心闲长发而你，心不闲也长发．你把长长的发绕在辘轳上狗浅寐，　未央之夜无声, 辘轳无声，女人无声汪汪轻吠，如涌你在井中浣洗浓浓的发

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-07-07 08:35:28 Post subject:

地心深处: 改成：深处的心 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

野航
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Posted: 2007-07-07 14:06:26 Post subject:

好亲切的旧题，提起来。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-07-07 18:26:21 Post subject:

心不闲也长发．你把长长的发绕在辘轳上...............使我想起<篱笆女人和狗>那部影视.

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Posted: 2007-07-07 20:50:07 Post subject:

小小说。抑未竟。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-07 21:01:44 Post subject:

新版轱辘女人和狗~问好月光妹妹,欣赏好诗!

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-08 17:26:26 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

地心深处:

改成：

深处的心 Laughing

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-08 17:27:25 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

好亲切的旧题，提起来。

谢谢野航

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-08 17:28:26 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

心不闲也长发．你把
长长的发
绕在辘轳上...............使我想起<篱笆女人和狗>那部影视.

我还真没看这部电影

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-08 17:36:42 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

小小说。抑未竟。

抑未竟? 博士, 我还真不懂 Embarassed

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-08 17:37:26 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

新版轱辘女人和狗~问好月光妹妹,欣赏好诗!

问好月亮

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Posted: 2007-07-08 17:40:50 Post subject:

非常喜欢这三首诗！每首都可挖掘到更深的意蕴！耐读啊！问好诗人。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-07-08 19:41:00 Post subject:

长长的发绕在辘轳上复杂的美！欣赏！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-07-09 04:45:20 Post subject:

富有情感,轻灵的诗歌,问好白水 _________________ 路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-09 18:14:16 Post subject:

杨海军, 韩少君, 刘芸, 谢谢你们的鼓励.

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Posted: 2007-07-16 04:31:56 Post subject:

女人不是辘轳，还有篱笆和狗。精致的小诗。好。深处的心 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2007-07-18 05:22:29 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

女人不是辘轳，还有篱笆和狗。
精致的小诗。好。深处的心

问好伤城. 近来怎么不见你的诗歌?

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Posted: 2007-07-18 18:44:40 Post subject:

简短，很深很美的意境，喜欢！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-07-19 09:13:12 Post subject:

浅寐，　未央之夜无声, 辘轳无声，女人无声汪汪轻吠，如涌 _________________ 越来越蠢

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Posted: 2007-07-19 21:57:53 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

伤城 wrote:

女人不是辘轳，还有篱笆和狗。
精致的小诗。好。深处的心

问好伤城. 近来怎么不见你的诗歌?

注意力没放在诗上吧.哈哈
Smile

没有诗情的时候是怎么也写不出的.
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每个诗人都很重要

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