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背影
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PostPosted: 2007-07-17 20:05:35    Post subject: 背影 Reply with quote

背影

十年前,一条乡村小路上,澄净的蓝天下,一个小男孩望着一个小女孩的背影。
“你真好看!”小男孩突然发觉朝夕相处的小女孩很好看。话毕,小女孩的脸红了。
后来,他们长大了,小女孩出嫁了,小男孩外出读书,他们难得碰面。
乡人们提起她的时候,小男孩不禁怀念起那个背影,涌出一丝若有似无的惆怅。

十年后,一条乡村小路上,澄净的蓝天下,一个男人望着一个妇人的背影。
男人发觉她有些丑陋,有些琐碎,不禁怀疑起自己当年的眼光。
他即刻想到,乡村的女人吧,是不容易保持容颜的。也许他外出太久了,他们的观念已不一样了。
他笑了。无论如何,这是他欣赏的第一个女性,也是他的关于爱的启蒙老师,他藏不住一丝悲伤。
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樱花听雨
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PostPosted: 2007-07-19 14:35:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

你写的是故事,不是散文诗。
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杜洪涛
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PostPosted: 2007-07-20 18:41:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢,思考中!
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西非
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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 06:26:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

Smile
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雪花
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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 08:40:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy
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