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两首动物诗

非马
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Posted: 2007-07-16 13:30:04 Post subject: 两首动物诗

羊屠刀指向自己咽喉的时候才来咩咩声明自己不属于沉默的大多数羊比猿猴其实更攀得上人类的血亲兔在我新筑的篱笆外白兔的眼睛对著满园子鲜绿的菜蔬随太阳的升起一刻比一刻更红得可爱 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-07-16 13:53:43 Post subject:

拜读。问好。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-16 15:24:06 Post subject:

生动, 哲思

桔子
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Posted: 2007-07-16 16:27:42 Post subject:

形色并茂，学习学习

枫华墨客
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Posted: 2007-07-16 20:03:12 Post subject: Re: 两首动物诗

非马 wrote:

羊

屠刀指向
自己咽喉的时候
才来咩咩
声明自己不属于
沉默的大多数

羊比猿猴
其实更攀得上
人类的血亲

兔

在我新筑的
篱笆外
白兔的眼睛
对著
满园子鲜绿的
菜蔬
随太阳的升起
一刻比一刻
更红得可爱

有趣！

前一首说，我们虽然温顺，但也可以绵绵几声，如同无力的手指，打几个不关痛痒的文字，做几下抗争的样子，或者，根本就没有真实的抗争，就成了盘里的羔羊。

后一首，读来很美，意思却是在说，那篱笆外面的，在“眼红”自己的文菜呢吧？ Laughing

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溪语
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Posted: 2007-07-16 20:12:45 Post subject:

小而精.学习了! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-16 21:51:04 Post subject:

讽喻，形象～枫华墨客解读得很到位！问好非马先生！

kino
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Posted: 2007-07-16 21:54:18 Post subject:

不做羊，也不当兔子，呵呵~~

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-07-16 23:10:54 Post subject:

有哲思,学习!

非马
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Posted: 2007-07-17 04:02:43 Post subject:

问大家好!谢谢诸位热烈的反应. _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

叶英儿
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Posted: 2007-07-17 17:19:20 Post subject:

很实在.

黑雨滴
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Posted: 2007-07-17 20:43:10 Post subject:

,欣赏,学习 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-07-17 23:03:09 Post subject:

非马先生的诗总有令人意外的思考。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-07-18 16:32:07 Post subject:

喜欢第二首，学习 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2007-07-18 18:41:28 Post subject:

哲理的诗句 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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