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果子

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Posted: 2007-07-18 00:43:34 Post subject: 果子

果子疏离了的枝间，你孤独地悬挂果子，也许，也许这只是我的错觉每一朵花开都会有一种必然的结果呈现出来的不仅仅是饱满的，有足够水分的，想当然的美丽那没有被阳光垂怜到的青迹，果虫的吻痕，失足的下落都是这种必然方式的另类完美的出场终究是要残缺来衬托的到最后，熟悉的绝望和陌生的拥抱总是让我潸然泪下因为我没有足够大的筐来装进所有的以任何面目出现的你人们总是以虔诚的姿态来仰望这个你出现的季节忽略了干燥的，烟草味的，凉爽背后的沧然或者说是不愿意去关注，以自欺欺人的方式给自己一个合理的安慰春天的期望，夏天隐晦的调情渐次水染，但总算没有杂乱局促秋虫的鸣叫错落有声，声声都在映你的孤独我愿意在午后这样的想像，这样的揣测，这样的体会愿意推敲一个个模糊的场景和清晰的你愿意渲染浓烈的气息和即将来到的腐败果子，你愿意吗？ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-07-18 00:57:45 Post subject:

问好,喜欢的结尾. _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

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Posted: 2007-07-18 03:56:21 Post subject:

好深刻的诗歌~欣赏并学习！问好阿琼

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Posted: 2007-07-18 03:59:04 Post subject:

收藏了，学习！

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Posted: 2007-07-18 04:04:05 Post subject:

再读，觉得诗句可以再凝练些吧，拙见！

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Posted: 2007-07-18 04:22:13 Post subject:

月月，你好！有时候写很简短的文字，希望一个字就有无限的寓意在里面，但有时候也喜欢这样重叠反复的写法，强调一种意境或是表达辗转迂回的心境。 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-07-18 04:54:39 Post subject:

思维之涌流

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Posted: 2007-07-18 15:35:14 Post subject:

我愿意在午后这样的想像，这样的揣测，这样的体会愿意推敲一个个模糊的场景和清晰的你愿意渲染浓烈的气息和即将来到的腐败果子，你愿意吗？ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-07-20 01:39:29 Post subject:

问好我的朋友们！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-07-20 06:57:15 Post subject:

有才华!有意境!拜读!

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Posted: 2007-07-20 07:31:49 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

月月，你好！

有时候写很简短的文字，希望一个字就有无限的寓意在里面，
但有时候也喜欢这样重叠反复的写法，强调一种意境或是
表达辗转迂回的心境。

呵呵，明月和阿依都换了靓妆。简短文字或展转文字都很好啊
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每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2007-07-20 13:59:27 Post subject:

提读!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-07-21 17:18:21 Post subject:

熟悉的绝望和陌生的拥抱总是让我潸然泪下因为我没有足够大的筐 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2007-07-22 20:44:33 Post subject:

散了，但是美 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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