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七绝 <茶肆>

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-16 05:38:43 Post subject: 七绝 <茶肆>

七绝 <茶肆> 冷眼窗棂乱世惊茶浓月淡伴松明剑毫沸鼎酬天下笑对寒风骤与停

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-07-16 06:23:58 Post subject:

豪气 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-16 15:02:59 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

豪气

是毫气或茶气

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-07-16 15:04:56 Post subject:

读白水兄之咏荷诗,有荷波之柔美,读茶肆诗,有剑气之豪情.欣赏.

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-16 15:12:53 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

读白水兄之咏荷诗,有荷波之柔美,读茶肆诗,有剑气之豪情.欣赏.

谢谢黄老师鼓励

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-16 18:07:37 Post subject:

欣赏并学习。

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2007-07-17 08:09:05 Post subject:

白水好像出道之人嘛。冷冷的啊。嘿嘿。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-17 13:06:05 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

白水好像出道之人嘛。冷冷的啊。
嘿嘿。

焦躁何以度酷暑?
难得心静自然凉

问好高原鱼. 欣赏你的诗歌.

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-07-20 09:43:12 Post subject:

沉静．大气． _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-20 12:46:51 Post subject:

问好暗香

晓松
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Posted: 2007-07-20 20:44:15 Post subject:

剑毫沸鼎，笑对寒风。的确不同凡响。

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-21 06:11:04 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

剑毫沸鼎，
笑对寒风。
的确不同凡响。

问好晓松, 你看那刚沏的好茶一根是一根直棱棱的都朝天竖立着. 让我想到了剑, 也想到了人.

此诗是为和高原鱼的"七绝茶肆偶遇" 而作, 韵,题相近. 但那天他还有另一首诗, 灵感是从这两首诗歌而获 Very Happy

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=31104&highlight=#31104

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Posted: 2007-07-21 16:50:22 Post subject:

紧张中还有些轻松，有点像武侠小说中的意境哩。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-24 14:06:34 Post subject:

谢谢. 哪天真试着写写武侠什么的

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