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审判拟或救赎文/伊剑 (发一首诗友在我博里给我的图片配的诗歌)

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-13 19:34:22 Post subject: 审判拟或救赎文/伊剑 (发一首诗友在我博里给我的图片配的诗歌)

审判拟或救赎文/伊剑 1. 给我未来,还是抹去过去? 主的旨吗?阳光没有跟随进来? 门开着,出去!你是你,我是我. 2. 因为一层薄纱,更具杀伤力清晰的平原,山峰,谷底谁将倒下,谁将我奉我为神 3. 我已准备好,以最开放的姿势审判拟或救赎时间已经停顿我的美在你心中永远延续 [/img]

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Posted: 2007-07-13 21:28:02 Post subject:

我的美在你心中永远延续永恒的美，藏在心中． _________________ 路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

金金
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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:09:17 Post subject:

提！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

湘妃123
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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:37:06 Post subject:

好

上城
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Posted: 2007-07-16 04:55:12 Post subject:

_________________ 每个诗人都很重要

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-07-16 14:22:36 Post subject:

好！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-07-16 15:14:37 Post subject:

WOW, 好美的月亮

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-16 21:55:59 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

WOW, 好美的月亮 Very Happy

哇，月光妹妹可别乱说话啊，那只是图片，不是照片哈哈～ Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-07-16 22:06:40 Post subject:

那照片不好，总感觉衣服会往下掉～～

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Posted: 2007-07-16 22:59:43 Post subject:

这诗对图的阐释倒很好!呵呵,问候明月!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-17 02:55:22 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

这诗对图的阐释倒很好!呵呵,问候明月!

那是别人的诗歌，不是我的 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-07-17 02:57:09 Post subject:

kino wrote:

那照片不好，总感觉衣服会往下掉～～

呵呵，用你的眼睛帮她提

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Posted: 2007-07-17 03:19:24 Post subject:

有一种特别的感觉!提!!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-07-17 03:38:09 Post subject:

找不到自己因为你的存在脱光了衣裳请相信上帝也会被我迷失那光明和黑暗都是欺伪的器具 _________________ 我是个平凡的人，但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情，每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。

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