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关于鱼(外二)(修改了下,请大家继续批~)
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 21:18:00    Post subject: 关于鱼(外二)(修改了下,请大家继续批~) Reply with quote

(一)关于鱼

     文/半溪明月


棉花朵、金勾簪、三五颗露珠
这些符号装饰云的窗口
风,重伤了五彩石
天一天天漏

雨,盛在玻璃器皿内
养一条胖头鱼,游戈
虚无缥缈的幽灵



(二)城市生活

在城市里住鸟笼,啄鸟食
蚂蚁一样地工作
看血腥恐怖电影
戴人皮面具,摆各种造型
在黑暗的角落里繁衍生息

(三)玩笑

“昨晚我梦到你了”
这样说的时候,他
看起来一本正经。我笑
如果追问下去,肯定
就中了他的圈套

而我恍惚的是:
昨晚梦中的你是那样清晰
站在你身旁的女人
面容模糊是谁?



2007-7-16
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 23:31:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜歡魚
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踏过废墟,走来
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PostPosted: 2007-07-16 02:46:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
喜歡魚

感谢喜欢,问好阿依~ Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-07-16 05:47:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢玩笑.

月亮小心哦
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PostPosted: 2007-07-16 08:19:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
喜欢玩笑.

月亮小心哦
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谢妹妹关心,呵呵,真的是开玩笑,他喊得很高声,我好象是笑着说的"这话听着不爽".要是接了他话茬,就会被他骂了..呵呵,不和同事之间开此类玩笑. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-16 08:58:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

"鱼"如此让人玩味,富有人生哲理,很喜欢.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-16 14:18:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

能够成为别人的梦中人,好幸福!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-17 04:16:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

感 觉不错的诗!!!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-17 19:38:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好同城人许星,问好少君海军~
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