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远嫁的新娘（外一首）

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-07-13 17:03:06 Post subject: 远嫁的新娘（外一首）

远嫁的新娘郭文沫没有比这更朴素的新娘没有唢呐没有花轿更为糟糕的是还没有新郎其实全然不是一场婚礼你必须精心打扮必须一次一次裁剪一次一次换上洁白的婚纱哼一支恒世不变的曲调嫁给远方你必须亲自叩开一扇扇紧闭的大门想必那里会有你的新郎我总是这么想蜜蜂在花丛里飞来飞去我不止一次的想停下来吧看那朵美丽的玉兰花开的多么舒展小蚂蚁蜷缩在洞里我不止一次的想出来走走吧倾听冰峰破裂的声音是多么的美妙

刘芸
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Posted: 2007-07-13 21:33:48 Post subject:

远嫁的新娘，让我想到流浪的云． _________________ 路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走.

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:27:47 Post subject: 谢刘芸

问好刘芸

金金
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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:31:58 Post subject:

很好看 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

湘妃123
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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:34:01 Post subject: 喜欢了

喜欢了

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-07-14 06:10:29 Post subject: Re: 喜欢了

谢谢湘妃

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-07-14 23:38:42 Post subject: Re: 喜欢了

问好北美枫各位朋友！

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-15 05:06:50 Post subject:

后一首比上一首的感觉好！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-07-15 05:49:20 Post subject:

好！有底气的作品。不一般。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-07-15 07:10:27 Post subject: 问好

海军好！

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-07-15 07:11:30 Post subject:

郭文沫 wrote:

海军好！

问好韩少君！感谢您！

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