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这梅雨季节让秋提前

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-12 19:44:02 Post subject: 这梅雨季节让秋提前

这梅雨季节让秋提前文/半溪明月暴雨后，雷仍在积云背后跺脚震落一些雨滴被风搂入怀冰冷的白纸溅起朵朵水花遥远的北方传回预告你那里大旱，而我的南方水涝这梅雨季节让秋提前是谁左右了你的天空女人总有倾不完的泪从早春二月到七月昏黄淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁冷热交锋的情绪天空下着失重无法着陆的雨而一群小田鼠惊恐着爬往高处这濒临绝堤的江河水位我的小悲伤不想再增加高度 2007-7-12

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白水
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Posted: 2007-07-12 19:50:38 Post subject:

这濒临绝堤的江河水位我的小悲伤不想再增加高度不错的借寓．

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阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-07-13 07:37:54 Post subject:

欣賞了! 喜歡的說~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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金金
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Posted: 2007-07-14 00:32:19 Post subject:

小小的东西都被你写得这么有感情。。。。狠狠地喜欢一下！！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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山城子
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Posted: 2007-07-14 00:52:22 Post subject:

天人一体的情怀！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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湘妃123
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戴玨
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Posted: 2007-07-14 05:18:17 Post subject: Re: 这梅雨季节让秋提前

半溪明月 wrote:

...
遥远的北方传回预告
你那里大旱，而我的南方水涝
这梅雨季节让秋提前

是谁左右了你的天空
女人总有倾不完的泪
从早春二月到七月昏黄

淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁
冷热交锋的情绪天空
下着失重无法着陆的雨
...

有點暈忽，那個“你”那裏到底是大旱還是淅淅瀝瀝？ Confused

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-14 05:54:30 Post subject: Re: 这梅雨季节让秋提前

戴玨 wrote:

半溪明月 wrote:

...
遥远的北方传回预告
你那里大旱，而我的南方水涝
这梅雨季节让秋提前

是谁左右了你的天空
女人总有倾不完的泪
从早春二月到七月昏黄

淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁
冷热交锋的情绪天空
下着失重无法着陆的雨
...

有點暈忽，那個“你”那裏到底是大旱還是淅淅瀝瀝？ Confused

北方的你那里大旱,我这里南方水涝~呵呵，问好!

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-14 06:11:48 Post subject:

湘妃123 wrote:

问好~

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-14 06:16:20 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

天人一体的情怀！

感谢山城子老师批阅~问好! Very Happy

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-14 06:40:26 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

小小的东西都被你写得这么有感情。。。。

狠狠地喜欢一下！！

呵呵，谢金金喜欢~

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-14 06:48:26 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

欣賞了!

喜歡的說~~

问好阿琼,呵呵~

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-14 06:54:24 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

这濒临绝堤的江河水位
我的小悲伤不想再增加高度

不错的借寓．

抱抱月光妹妹,青蛙让他见鬼去吧~呵呵! Very Happy

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阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-07-14 07:02:26 Post subject:

再次來讀~依舊的喜歡! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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戴玨
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Posted: 2007-07-14 23:33:36 Post subject: Re: 这梅雨季节让秋提前

半溪明月 wrote:

戴玨 wrote:

半溪明月 wrote:

...
遥远的北方传回预告
你那里大旱，而我的南方水涝
这梅雨季节让秋提前

是谁左右了你的天空
女人总有倾不完的泪
从早春二月到七月昏黄

淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁
冷热交锋的情绪天空
下着失重无法着陆的雨
...

有點暈忽，那個“你”那裏到底是大旱還是淅淅瀝瀝？ Confused

北方的你那里大旱,我这里南方水涝~呵呵，问好!

那“是谁左右了你的天空”一句是否怨對方無情？無淚可灑？
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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-15 00:27:56 Post subject: Re: 这梅雨季节让秋提前

戴玨 wrote:

半溪明月 wrote:

戴玨 wrote:

半溪明月 wrote:

...
遥远的北方传回预告
你那里大旱，而我的南方水涝
这梅雨季节让秋提前

是谁左右了你的天空
女人总有倾不完的泪
从早春二月到七月昏黄

淅淅沥沥、倾盆或者阴郁
冷热交锋的情绪天空
下着失重无法着陆的雨
...

有點暈忽，那個“你”那裏到底是大旱還是淅淅瀝瀝？ Confused

北方的你那里大旱,我这里南方水涝~呵呵，问好!

那“是谁左右了你的天空”一句是否怨對方無情？無淚可灑？

呵呵，你是用线把我往出牵哈，不上当~你理解的不错！ Very Happy

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-15 00:30:46 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

再次來讀~依舊的喜歡!

感谢阿依能这样喜欢，这诗写完自己也不觉得多好，不过是些小情绪！

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杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-15 05:04:49 Post subject:

我的小悲伤不想再增加高度好！！提！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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韩少君
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Posted: 2007-07-15 05:46:11 Post subject:

而一群小田鼠惊恐着爬往高处这濒临绝堤的江河水位我的小悲伤不想再增加高度喜欢！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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荷梦
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Posted: 2007-07-15 17:40:26 Post subject:

是自然的雨季还是心灵?难以辨别了,写得挺好的,学习了!

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