游向高原的鱼 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
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Posted: 2007-07-14 08:09:55 Post subject: 和柳上惠《黑窑主通缉令》(新韵) |
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和柳上惠《黑窑主通缉令》(新韵)
罗网一张何处逃,
敢说日子尚迢遥?
将军巨擘弯弓处,
谁怕黑云掩老雕!
附注柳上惠原诗
海捕传文防出逃,
黄河望断太行遥.
挽弓当引穿云箭,
万里青天射皂雕。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-14 17:37:36 Post subject: |
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好选题, 提读. |
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叶英儿 秀才
Joined: 03 Jun 2006 Posts: 577 Location: 中国 叶英儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-19 17:05:01 Post subject: |
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不错,问好. |
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游向高原的鱼 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
游向高原的鱼Collection |
Posted: 2007-07-20 02:30:35 Post subject: |
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大家好! _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。 |
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