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花儿们草儿们（外一首）

山城子
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Posted: 2007-07-07 06:44:41 Post subject: 花儿们草儿们（外一首）

花儿们草儿们（外一首）文/山城子·李花儿们摇曳着缤纷从山野的小路从城市的大街一朵朵一朵朵的飘摇妩媚草儿们趁着年轻追着花儿们疯跑不小心撞上谁的感觉摔倒在花儿们的怀抱哎哟！哎哟！快乐地欢叫山城子说：别闹了别闹了现在开始上课…… 我们的营帐如约移到夏天移到很风凉的西部高原山里野百合不愿意去城市毛毛草摇着山风说最怕遭遇的纠缠营帐里一派花香草长外面有鸟儿飞过蓝天将这儿的信息衔向远方喀斯特地貌很干净空气永远芬芳来吧！天下的花草呼吸我们的营帐会长出茂盛的希望飞溅圣洁的情怀恣意博大的舞台一任压抑的歌喉放开一任肢体语言释放一位老人弹拨日月为花草们伴奏…… 通讯地址：561104 贵州省平坝县红湖学校李德贵电子邮件：shanchengzil@163.com

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-07 07:15:45 Post subject:

山城子说：别闹了别闹了现在开始上课……

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-07-07 18:24:05 Post subject:

鲜活有想像.

博弈
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Posted: 2007-07-07 20:47:29 Post subject:

亦具现代语实验精神，修辞与语音，挺有意思。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-07-07 21:09:53 Post subject:

活泼的诗歌~

山城子
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Posted: 2007-07-08 07:07:02 Post subject:

谢谢四位诗人！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-07-08 15:25:10 Post subject:

你们真的热爱教育！诗歌为证。诗人——你有福了！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

山城子
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Posted: 2007-07-10 06:09:13 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

你们真的热爱教育！诗歌为证。诗人——你有福了！

——嗬嗬！我已经退了！

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-11 01:55:29 Post subject:

一位老人弹拨日月为花草们伴奏…… 内有一条暗线。。。。。。。。问候诗人！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2007-07-11 22:54:48 Post subject:

几快活！

山城子
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Posted: 2007-07-12 17:53:11 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

一位老人弹拨日月
为花草们伴奏……

内有一条暗线。。。。。。。。问候诗人！

_问好杨海军！

山城子
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Posted: 2007-07-12 17:54:14 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

几快活！

——问好七小姐！

金金
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Posted: 2007-07-14 00:14:31 Post subject:

喜欢这个风格！！` _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

山城子
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Posted: 2007-07-14 00:19:35 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

喜欢这个风格！！`

谢谢金金的喜欢！

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